ds: chapter 4 cover

starting chapter 4 @ [link] this week~ 8D
vote @ [link] iffen you want

I think there are some weirdo problems with
this [something in her face/mouth, probably? and
~*mysterious light source*~ lol] but I can't really
identify exactly what needs fixing aside from redoing
her head entirely and...I'd really rather not go back
that far LOL. [of you know, point it out, I cans till fix
it xD]
edit:
actually maybe it's her head being too long...like it
needs to be moved up into her hair more...? XD
but then the post is prolly fucked. *stomps hindsight*
/edit

I had fun colouring it tho. I did the black and white deal
again. I am just not good at shading with real depth...it's
something I need to work on pretty bad. Prolly my next
goal, is to do dramatic shading like that XDD

Anyway..uhh... enjoy, and read [link] !!



Oh btw... the title for this chapter comes from [link] v.v;;
I don't care for the song too much, but I liked the line,
"through the storm you go, giving up your home, you go,
leaving all you've known." and it seemed like a good lyric
for the mood of the situation in d*s. xD










--edit 5/18--
Okay, I think this looks a lot better now lol. XD Thanks
for the tips you guys =] It still looks a bit odd, I guess,
but I did the best I could without scrapping the whole
thing haha.


--edit 2 5/18---
Okay, I think it's as good as it's gonna get. xD I narrowed
her shoulders to fit her new/improved head, softened the
line on the top of her head from black to hair colour, adjusted
her eyes and lips. I think I am gonna put this one to rest.

Thanks for all the help guys =] I'll ask ya'll next time I have
a pic i can logically fix like this one. [it's easier when it's less
lineart and more painty like this!] Thank you thank you
thank you =]